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dear forever,
I do not surrender to you.
though my feet are tired
defeated
my heart still beats on with
every inhalation
he takes

though the insides of
my wrists are bruised, blood
still flows through whatever
veins he may have left
unbroken.

dear forever,
how long will it take
till I learn?  must I
shatter
before my heart will have the
power to stop jumping with
every swallow he takes?

waiting to break is much
worse than
waiting on you.
because i wish we could grow together, but i know that we are unable to.
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Morticia-Lynne Feb 16, 2014  Student Writer
'waiting to break is much worse than waiting on you', best part to me. Beautiful work as always <3
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :heart:
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:iconmorticia-lynne:
Morticia-Lynne Feb 23, 2014  Student Writer
No problem :)
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Sammur-amat Jan 25, 2014   General Artist
*sighs deeply* :tighthug: :heart:
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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haphazardmelody Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So very sad and vulnerable.
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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abrizelle Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful, and so, so sad. Very relatable, but at the same time unique. The third stanza is wonderful. Amazing job on this one <3
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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abrizelle Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome.
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