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i fucking bleed ink
like a broken pen; bent
plastic and
words pouring from my mouth.

let me try this again
in english:

sometimes,
i wish i would just
die already.
this is my denouement.
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:iconmorticia-lynne:
Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student Writer
Short, but incredibly powerful.
Especially the middle, it completely breaks the readers preparations from your beginning (Like the usual excitement you get from seeing the first five minutes of a action movie, or the first tear-jerker of a sad movie, you prepare for the rest), and the last part just stabs right into the reader's heart.
Absalotely stunning work.
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014   General Artist
you are so very beautiful, darling girl. :huggle: <3
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :hug: :heart:
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LadyMortimus Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow, this is really breath-taking. You speak with such an honesty that is almost admirable. I've featured this on my page, hope you don't mind. :) Stay strong and keep your head up, beautiful. :heart:
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for the feature!  :heart:
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LadyMortimus Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student General Artist
You're welcome, it was much deserved :)
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TheKatWhoGotJinxxed Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Stay strong. Heart
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:icona-lovely-anxiety:
A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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TheKatWhoGotJinxxed Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful words.

I hope you get through what you're going through....
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