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Caliginosity
Caliginosity
I tried to write for you again,
Titled the piece “Pour The Ink,”
Playing with metaphor of a broken pen
And the cliché of a broken heart.
I wrote again.
The other dubbed, “Tornado,”
Scribbled on it blindly,
All of my blinding emotions and pain,
But of course,
I threw that one away,
Because I’m indecisive,
But more than that?
It’s truly poetic
And fit to form
‘Cause I liked that piece--
No, I loved it.
But it was too painful to read,
‘Cause mentally
I’m still not where I need to be,
Because you’re not here with me.
You’re not here with me,
And that sti
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under the unders
lately i’ve been under the unders,
which is to say lately i’ve been hosting the ghosts
of everything i’ve ever loved and that silence gets to you,
you know, it tears you like the idea of something horrific
and before you know it, your entire existence is
a fresco of maybes and apologies and snapped skulls
and by snapped skulls, i am alluding to the notion that this sterile noise,
this silence, drives you crazy. once, a man told me that boredom
has its holy uses and i laughed at him and the rush of nostalgia
that immediately followed was the worst melancholy,
let me tell you, it was like feeling each of your trillio
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napowrimo
1. i've stopped fearing
my nightmares
and when i dream about
dying
i just see your face
and get your songs in my
head and stuck in my
throat
and i understand you now
i get it.
i get it
i get it.
now stop.
2. this is the darkest timeline.
this is everything that can go wrong
going wrong.
this is worse than you dying
this is worse than the burning
this is worse than you overstaying your welcome.
i cant even talk to him anymore
cause it just sounds like
he's sticking his fingers in his ears
and screaming how he's
notlisteningnotlisteningnotlistening.
which i should have done a long time ago.
3. i try to comprehend it sometimes
cause i kn
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one, part two.
i wonder if i'm not telling this story right. if i should put more in than what i am. but at the same time, i know what i'm doing. its the rest of the world i'm worried about. i hope you guys catch the point.
i would love any and all feedback, of course.
i wonder if i'm not telling this story right. if i should put more in than what i am. but at the same time, i know what i'm doing. its the rest of the world i'm worried about. i hope you guys catch the point.
i would love any and all feedback, of course.
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I cant say that I am getting the point you are intending but I am liking this series because of how it feels real.
With this one, there is a sort of quirkiness to the conversation that I find amusing and I think it also reveals personality aspects of both the relationship and each person.
I also like the minimalist approach you are taking. There is nothing extraneous to distract you like settings, just a straight forward conversation.
With this one, there is a sort of quirkiness to the conversation that I find amusing and I think it also reveals personality aspects of both the relationship and each person.
I also like the minimalist approach you are taking. There is nothing extraneous to distract you like settings, just a straight forward conversation.