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i.
her stomach hollows out sometimes,
but you never hear it cry out in the sort
of desperate plea that you think
she does.
her body ain't a kingdom and her heart sure
ain't an oasis, but she's got
the body of an hourglass (not that she knows how
to tell her own time.)

ii.
the bathroom door is always
locked when you get home, and she never fails
to keep her secrets just
as tucked away in her bosom as she does you
away from her misery.
she never lets you buy her clothes
because it seems that she never ever wears her
own anymore.
all they do is swallow her up in a pitied
attempt to kill her off.
besides, your pockets are heavier
when she doesn't weigh so much.

iii.
her voice is so soft now.
she never speaks--too afraid to start a war from
simple words.
you like her better than your ex who
spit fire and brimstone at you, and never once would
shut up while you fucked
her into seeing white.

iv.
her daddy was always a rich man,
which is why she's got magazines of pretty girls--
not her--strewn all over
your bathroom floor.  which is
okay with you because
sometimes you picture yourself
marrying this girl, and when you do,
money is always a simple answer.

v.
but the girl's got
just as many daddy issues as any other
crazy girl you dated.
you're pretty damn sure that when her mouth's
pouring over your cock, tongue
like a hurricane, that she's thinking of
her daddy.  maybe even while
she's riding against you, with nothing but the sound
of slapping skin in the air,
she's thinking of how goddamn much she
wishes that
you wouldn't touch her ever again.

and you love it.
i read a highly disturbing article today that inspired this.  you can find it here: www.returnofkings.com/21313/5-…

the blog it's on, return of kings, is disgusting.  i hate this world.
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Blue-Plaid-PJs Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh my god that article is disgusting. Thank you for making a poem that shows just how terrible its message is.
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:icona-lovely-anxiety:
A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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:iconnightshade-keyblade:
nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Idiots will be idiots. Screw them
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Student Writer
Beautifully written, but what a sad situation.
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luminescent0513 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I noticed that everyone was talking about how horrible the article was, so I read it... Words can no longer describe how much I have decided to hate the world because of that. Of all the disgusting, terrible, jackassy things to do... I just can't even comprehend it!

And I thought that I had lost hope in everything before that.
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yes well, it's sickening that real people think like that.
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luminescent0513 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poem, though, is just as impactful as all of the other beautiful works you've posted.
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :heart:
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corroded-mindx Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
May I hate the world with you? 
What a putrid fucking site.
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:icona-lovely-anxiety:
A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it seriously does happen.
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